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Y Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Chapter 8
Sarah

Chemistry was such a bore but Anabel and I kept ourselves entertained by discussing where to go after school. Sarah, Anabel and I had Gym together. We were giggling like crazy while gossiping about Eleanor. Halfway through the lesson, Carl approached me. “Erm, Alana?” “Yes?” I flashed a soft smile. He blushed. He was too stumped to talk. “What is it, darling Carl?” I prompted him. “I was just wondering if you need help with Math. I’ve finished your previous assignment.” He stuttered along the way. “Oh, if I need help, you’ll be the first one on my list. Ok?” I asked as I tapped his nose lightly with my fingertips. “Ok.” He seemed a little drunk before I walked away. “Carl?” Anabel asked. “Yup, the nerd.” I replied instantly. Sarah laughed melodiously. “Maybe, I’ll try my tactics on him.” She declared. “Don’t try to steal my calculator from me.” I hissed. “A little flirting wouldn’t kill.” I thought otherwise.

Sarah was of mixed blood. American father, African grandmother and Chinese grandfather. That made her stand out. She was generally small in size for a fourteen-year-old. Her black hair draped like a short curtain over her shoulders. Her skin was much tanner, probably the genes. Her brown eyes were dull but her lips were that shade of sexy red. Fantastic to kiss. Today, she’s dressed in a pale blue frock and black tights, exposing her toned arms. Compared to Carl, she was Miss Universe.

heys. sorri to disappoint ya all.
#1 another short short chapter
#2 i think i'll stop at chap 10 or 12
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if ya want the story, which apparently i am not done with
i think i'll email ya all.
coz some parts of the story gets all little touchy
lyke chapter 16...
so update ya next time

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passerby: hey thanks for the comments. i'll treat them as constructive critisism. yup. and i'm not in america, so a little blur about their educational systme though. and yup. this is just a draft. mistakes are unavoidable. especially grammar.
krystal: wads wrong with the blogskin? of all things to critisise....

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