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Y Sunday, October 12, 2008

Chapter 10
Car ride

“Alana!” Marilyn called out behind me. “Yes?” I answered in the same angelic voice as I whisked my head around. “Caroline’s heard the argument already.” She said in a dull, monotonous voice. “What did she say?” I slammed my locker. “Caroline’s giving Sarah a hard time.” I laughed nervously. “Is she out to kill me?” I added with a giggle. “I don’t know. She’d probably get as fierce as Caroline is now.” I shuddered at the thought of fierce Caroline. Marilyn broke the silence. “Is Rosalie going to send you home?” “Do you think I’ll go in that ancient truck?” I rolled my eyes. “You have taste to choose a better car to ride in, don’t you? ” “Uh-huh.” “So you won’t mind a ride from me?” she asked casually. I grinned. “Let’s hop in.” she added, leading me to the car park.
Sarah was sitting on the hood, sulking. Trying to divert my attention, I noticed Marilyn’s car. It was a glossy pale blue Volkswagen. I stared in amazement. “I’ll never be able to own something like that in my entire life.” I sighed. Marilyn sensed my thoughts and chipped in. “Pretty, isn’t it?” “Yes of course.” My answer was somewhat redundant. Any idiot would know that that’s pretty. “It’s brand-new. Caroline gave it to me. I told my mom I traded it. And she believed it,” Marilyn chuckled. “My old Honda is still somewhere in Caroline’s garage.” She smiled. I started giggling. “What’s wrong, Alana?” She seemed annoyed. “I didn’t know a goody girl like you could lie so well.” I teased. “Aw!” She let out a high-pitch cry. “Haha!” I laughed loudly, running towards the Volkswagen. “Alana!” I heard the desperation in her voice. When, I got closer to the lot, I spotted Caroline and Jasper two cars away. Jasper was playing with her hair, while she locked her arms around his waist. Caroline’s head was resting on Jasper’s chest as he muttered something softly in her ear. I wondered if Anabel would be pissed off. After all, she snatched Jasper away from Eleanor.


“Alana. Caroline?” I heard Jasper say. “Oh darling, buhbye.” Caroline hugged him tightly. “Time to go now.” Jasper ruffled her hair. Then all in a moment, Caroline hovered around me protectively. “My darling.” She started the conversation casually. “Yes Caroline?” “It’s good that you’re coming along with us.” “What?” I whispered softly but it was drowned by Marilyn’s calls. “Caroline! Did you car break down?” Caroline giggled. “No, dear.” She patted Marilyn’s shoulders. “Then why in the world are you here?” “Cause I feel like to?” “For goodness sake.” Marilyn seemed frustrated. “Fine dear, don’t be so angry.” Caroline paused to sweep Marilyn’s fringe to the side. “Anabel had an errand. She borrowed my car.” “You should have told me earlier,” she smiled, “Let’s get in.” It felt so good to with them. So carefree. So fun.

chapter 10!
no more masterpiece
i really think my writing sucks
so there will a big revamp for the story
i hope it'll turn for the better
but for the time being juz post the old ones
sorri arr...

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